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Hazel

37 years old from Britain


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Babies

2007-02-01
I agree with this too, although i may be in the generation you are talking about. But what you are saying is completely true, the innocense in younger people is shocking......I mean i didnt know alot, i was quite naive about things until i was a bit older, well the age i am now.
My little sister who is 14, shockingly has done lots of things i wouldnt dream of doing at her age, i find it horrible.
So well done! i hope you poem becomes false soon, but i dont think it will :(


The love's arrows

2007-01-30
Yes love affects the heart and can cut as painful as a sword when the loved ones are hurting.i like this one


Beauty

2007-01-30
I enjoyed this poem, the whole meaning of beauty is skin deep. I cant say i'm beautiful, but others can. But i can say i have a beautiful personality...just like you declare you do too.


With a Rose

2007-01-21
Im deeply touched by this poem, i know how it feels to miss the person closest to you, to long so much for their warming presence....i do every minute im away from the one i love. :)


Welcome to hell baby (a repost)

2007-01-12
wow i can feel the tension in this one, and especially the last bit makes a great finally!!!!talk about sweet revenge!


Lovers infinity

2007-01-12
i like this one, infinity....and the feeling of passion in every word!!! my idea of a lover!!!!


This Flower

2006-12-20
this was beautiful, very elegant of the metaphoric of a woman to a flower, a beautiful metaphor....i would love to be compared to a flower....so precious and fragile....Beautiful!!!!!


Fatal Kiss

2006-12-20
i found this really entertaining to read, i found it unusual to be reading from a vampire's thoughts, the more i liked it..it had a seductive linger to him as well. charming!:o)


Love's Journey

2006-12-20
this moved me, it was so soothingly beautiful, describing a love so strong between you and your other half. An inspiration for me, i wish to spend the eternity with my boyfriend....just like you've said in this poem....i love it!!!!


I'm so confused!

2006-12-17
yes, its such a scary move leading with your heart, but i did it when i fell in love and it was the best thing i ever did!!!!go for it chick!!!if you have already, go you x


Tears

2006-12-12
i like this one, very few words, leaves the rest to the imagination yet is so precise on what you mean.


Missing love

2006-12-12
i can feel the passion of your love through the poem, the strength of it seeps thorugh every line even through your hatred. the pain of the heart break and desire to be wanted. i feel for you, a wonderful poem. :')


Running naked on the street

2006-12-12
clothes being a lie, someone commented earlier....that is possibly true....as we are not telling the truth about ourselves our bodies if the are concealed - as there are so many things your body can tell others about your life and yourself......although i couldnt say no one could notice a naked person running through the street unless it became the norm....excellent poem!