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Morning Star

58 years old from USA


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Sacrament Without Words

2013-11-09
That's so beautiful and touching. A poetic fable the touches the heart and moves the soul.

Eloquent and beautiful. Thanks for the sharing.

Love
Morning Star


l i g h t as a feather

2013-09-04
Beautifully written, such a gifted read.
Just a wonderful poem. Thanks you.


Why We Call It Passing Away

2013-08-05
So very powerfully expressed, and expertly written.
You captured the experience of loss magnificently Countryfog.
Loved your poem.
Love
Morning Star


"7"autumn haiku

2013-08-05
Beautiful poetry. I am not so familiar with Haiku, but especially loved the following:

emerging from ice

and snow—a white swan—appears

"abject moon—thy sorrow"

Beautifully written, and poignant.


Calling

2013-06-16
A very interesting reflection on the life of a poet. Different and unique, and so well written.


Woman, bird, great, great song

2013-05-08
Beautiful poem, so well written and such a lovely sentiment of nature intertwined with freedom and expression.


12-Bar Blues (for Chaucer)

2013-05-05
Great poem, Countryfog. I love the diversity of your poetry.

This one is a winner. Unique and beautifully expressed.
Very different (in a good way)

Best wishes
Morning Star


What's More

2013-05-05
Great poem, perfectly expressed with the emotional dips and dives of a true poet.

You took us over the hill and back down again,
in the emotional insights you share.
Great job.


Bridge

2013-04-14
beautiful and insightful poem, magically written


Heaven's Own Paper

2013-03-02
Exceptional poem, just beautiful sentiments and very artistically written. A great read. Thanks for sharing.


LIFE HAS A LIFE OF ITS OWN

2013-02-23
Great poem, very cleverly written.
A wonderful read, as I followed the tapestry of the life your poem depicts.

Thanks for sharing


Natural beauty

2013-01-07
Just such a beautiful poem, so wonderfully expressed, and so where my heart has been today.

Thank you for sharing.


In this instance

2012-12-27
Very very beautiful, and very well written.

It captured the grace of your feelings with such eloquent.

So glad I read your poem; your very talented.


A poetic exile

2012-12-20
A powerful and beautifully written poem, very eloquent.


Freedom

2012-12-13
Very beautiful and profound poem, to which I most certainly relate.

Well written, and a gift of truth.

Blessings
Morning Star


Presence

2012-12-04
Very beautiful, profound, and majestic, written I think from the soul or that place of All-That-Is, that exists inside of us.

It held a special resonance for me, today, and so I am so glad that I read your beautiful poem Countryfrog. (Always want to call you Soulfrog, and then remember your screen name--which is also a fine name. I guess because your poems are so soul-based.)

Love
Morning Star


the one armed woman

2012-12-04
Beautifully written and a unique poem, very original.


A gift from the Heart

2012-11-15
Exceptional poem. I really love your poetry.

This one is just perfect for me today, and i also feel guided, intuitively, to read your poems from time to time. They seem heaven sent. : )

I especially love the first line of how our joy can erase the footprints in the sand. So powerful and true.


You still smile.

2012-11-03
Beautiful descriptions John,
and a wonderful expression of the heart.

Very touching poem.


next

2012-11-03
Wonderful poem and beautifully written.

I love the thread of uncertainty and yet there feels a sense of acceptance towards the end, liked the crane, for who we are and, perhaps, acceptance for the path that is less traveled.

(My interpretation at least.)

Lovely poem and I so enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing.


Over?

2012-10-24
Very interesting poem, and so well expressed.

Love the last lines:

loneliness
is in different rooms,
the baggage handlers
unable to cope.


Very interesting way to express it.


song of songs

2012-10-21
Very beautiful poem,
so full of meaning and metaphor.

A song to the soul, indeed.

Thanks for sharing.


The diamond of simplicity

2012-10-03
Such a profound and beautiful poem, that truly resonated to my heart today. Thank you for sharing.


hope

2012-09-29
A beautiful and inspirational message.

Lovely poem


unlock the ancient mysteries!

2012-09-29
I like your idea of wanting to build a new world, free of the limitations of the old one.

Great poem, well expressed.


Sideroads

2012-09-23
Excellent poem. Really beautiful in its depth of expression of the paths we try and pursue, even if only in the mind, that are absent in our hope gathering of love.

I really liked your poem.


eclipse on the beach

2012-09-19
Wonderful poem. I love your inclusion of the transience of everything and that the ancients measured everything in months.
A good reminder to slow down and take our "time."


even the earth dies

2012-09-07
Interesting poem, full of depth and reflection.
Very well written.


handball

2012-08-27
Very powerful poem, with a wonderful portrayal of the woman you poem describes.


Sands of Ocean Tides

2012-08-25
Very beautiful and heart-felt poem.


Stillness untold

2012-08-25
Very beautiful poem. Simply and pure and bursting with truth.

Its a treat.


dear stranger

2012-08-23
Wonderful poem. What a beautiful reflection on this communion with the Divine.


the sun and the moon

2012-08-23
Lovely poem, so beautiful.


The Time May Come

2012-08-15
That's a lovely poem, so hopeful, so inspiring, with a lovely ending.
Thanks for sharing.


In Withered Grey

2012-08-09
Interesting poem, full of wonderful contrasts.
I enjoyed your poem very much.


What The River Says

2012-08-08
A sad and reflective piece, with such depth and soulfulness.

This is my favorite too. They probably all are my favorites actually.

Lovely, tender poem.


Off The Beaten Track

2012-08-08
Beautiful description of a rouged terrain. Beautifully expressed. I love your detail of the landscape.

My favorite of yours.


Foreward (and Backward)

2012-08-02
I love the way you describe writing as something that emerges from sacred places--be these memories or momentary experiences.

I loved your text, and how you describe all creative expressions coming from that place of sacredness.


Just a bit...

2012-07-31
Lovely poem, with nice use of opposites. It made it very interesting, and a delightful read.

Thanks.


sight

2012-07-31
Very beautiful and meaningful poem, to me.

There is a tapestry, I believe, that is woven through the fabric of time and space that is unseen, by most, but can be seen by those attuned to their inner sense and mind's eye, who are not blinded by the physical (sight) of this world.

I loved your poem. It touched me deeply.

Thank you for sharing it.


Sarah

2012-07-23
Beautiful, lively, thoughtful poem. I love the way you describe her experience with such movement, and with such grace in the flow of your words.

Great poem Poppy !


Only now

2012-07-23
Wonderful poem that captures the truth, of simplicity in its simplicity. Very well expressed, I thought.


*In Worship of Your Beauty*

2012-07-23
What a beautiful poem. The wording is exquisite.

Truly touches the heart with its poetic muse.


Rain Life

2012-07-16
Rain Life.

What a wonderful melody of description for rain, water, in all of its versions and disguises. So beautifully expressed and unique. I have never read a poem that is dedicated to rainfall before.

Lovely poem Shells.


The One Heart

2012-07-16
The One Heart

A beautiful poem, so touched with truth and awakening. A gifted poem and beautifully expressed.


An aliveness full of peace

2012-07-10
very beautifully written and expression of the truth of peace.


The Other Side of the Hill

2012-07-10
I love the poem, especially the last verse where you await that something over the hill, that perhaps transcends the experience.


In this world

2012-07-10
Very meaningful poem, and beautifully written.
I agree that frailty, our vulnerability, and choice to surrender opens the gate wide to truly receiving the richness within us.


Awake

2012-06-22
I like your idea that problems exist from boredom. I think that's very true.

Very enlightening poem and beautifully written


Where heaven touches the earth

2012-06-22
That is so touching. I love your poem.

The ideas that our tears become satin petals that connect us to heaven. Very beautiful.