A Version of Married Life
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2024-04-21 Drama is all about suspension of disbelief. thats what makes it real for us. Collectively, we undertake to go down that path for a period of time. And Shakespeare also said- All the world is but a stage. Why not play along?
A thoughful and thought provoking poem, indeed
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Sit Back & Die!
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2024-04-21 Oh! yes
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ONE DAY TIME WILL END
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2024-04-20 This is so much you and your exact writing style, the evocative sentences.
oh yes! the possibilities and the sweetness of this thought.
In Hinduisim, the time is not linear but circulat so that it never ends. Also, in Hinduism, the purpose of life is to be free of this possibility also. Just be free of any thought or even attachment to a thought. Something like that.
Anyways, i repose faith in possibilities.
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KITTI'S WORDS
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2024-04-20 Ah! so beautiful and ofcourse your words are illuminating. Maybe the cho is diminishing, i get it but thats why we like to play with echos and shadows.
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RE-LIGHTING MY FIRE
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2024-04-20 Thanks from us too. I can understand. I also take these long breaks, until i must come here to inhale.
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ONE APRIL MORNING
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2024-04-20 yep
Nice April Morning
and also
coffee is worth looking forward to each morning.
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I Hear You
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2024-03-27 To read aloud and read softly what one writes sounds so nice.
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FOR UNKNOWN READERS EVERYWHERE
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2024-03-27 oh Yes, absolutely. Gratitude on my belaf too to my readers.
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What It Is
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2024-03-27 So true. And what a way to say it.
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Mirror of Patience
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2024-03-27 nice
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Getting Through a Dismal Day
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2024-03-27 ha ha
nice one
lot of joy in anticipation and the choice is hilarious compared to the other option. Amen!
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THE LUCKY ONE
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2024-03-27 Ah!
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The timeless song of Heart
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2024-03-27 your text tells the story of the shape taken by your words. Beautiful
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Under the Weather
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2024-03-27 Truly...Fireplace used to work like a balm in earlier days
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ten of three
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2024-03-17 Truly beautiful, Otp.
the way you say it!
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YOUR CHOICE
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2024-03-17 Such a deep ponderance.
My take would be undertaking a journey to be one with the one who is already one and then live in zero.
beautiful ponderings indeed.
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OUT OF A CLEAR BLUE SKY
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2024-03-06 Ah!
Just guider her into azure waters.
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nocturnal
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2024-03-06 beautiful
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for you
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2024-03-06 wow!
so nice
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Everyday in Jumbleorium, XXXIV (The Howl)
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2024-03-03 what an interesting narrative of a poem. Enjoyed every bit except the bite.
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Can i? 'cause you're sweet like a flower in bloom
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2024-03-03 lovely poem, Holly.
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THE MORE WE KNOW & UNDERSTAND (Work Completed)
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2024-03-03 oh Yes! its sometimes difiicult and sometimes easy. I guess , easy with strangers because i find them so open. Our own sometimes put the walls up.
But that's what makes life worth it and interesting as we all gather at this bay.
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T h r i v e
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2024-03-03 Oh yes! i also remember the moment when i exactly fell for myself.
i am bookmarking this one. A beautiful beautiful poem, indeed.
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In the Deep
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2024-03-03 oh dear! i do hope it all went fine or is going fine, RWS. Nice way to say it in a poem.
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ONCE MORE
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2024-03-03 Beyond beautiful and made sacred by fire. Also, more is always more...enticing.
Thanks for sharing this one.
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Seasons
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2024-03-03 A beautiful poem, indeed. This one particularly i enjoyed. Very in the moment. And what is also interesting is that i was patient with it for it was so loving a poem on my favourite topic of seasons- the transition time.
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Revolution
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2024-02-27 Yeah!
really interesting how you understood this one.
afterall, revolution is what makes it all worth it.
Hail, revolution!
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HERE'S TO SUNNY DAYS
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2024-02-26 ha ha ha
How i love this one.
a gem
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Dream by Ann Wood
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2024-02-26 A wish for a dream, rather an order. Cool
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MOON LANDING (Additan)
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2024-02-26 oh!
a true poet
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LIFE GOES ON (Additans)
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2024-02-26 yes, Ken
wise words
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Cleansing The Temple
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2024-02-26 "while silence gags any late words of remorse,
no matter how amplified- and in the soothing stillness that follows" says it all. As always, a layered poem.
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The only one
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2024-02-24 hi
i miss Ashe!
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Side effect
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2024-02-24 yes, Bravo and beautiful, RWS
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sotheby's
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2024-02-24 ha ha
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When The Trolls Are Dragged Out
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2024-02-24 Oh yes, Amen
I have been brought up on stories about adventures of Ivan, writings of Tolstoy and poems of Marina Tsvetaeva.
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Nostalgia
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2024-02-24 Ah! beautiful and yes, how sweet is this nostalgia and memory.
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STEPPED OUT OF THE FRONT DOOR
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2024-02-24 Yeah! Nice
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The Three Phases Of Defiance
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2024-02-22 I badly needed to hear these words today
Thank you so much
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heat pump
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2024-02-21 oh my!
where do i start, except that i am living in the poem still, even if i have come here to write.
"i see the best this planet offers—blue sky, white snow, green blades of grass" part
Though i loved how you dwelled and moved over the Lynn part.
Outdoors has so much to offer. i guess your poem made me realize that sometimes an expanse of space is rather good for exploration within. We dont always need a cave.
A beautiful poem and as always, Class apart.
And i am so glad, you are back in action.
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You think the narcissist will notice?
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2024-02-20 this is true.
accepting is first part, i will say.
there is more work to be done but the accepting part itself is so exhausting that there is little space left for much else but then other parts come in their own time on this path of awareness and self- care.
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HOSPITAL DAYS - 10
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2024-02-20 may be i do have wierd sense of humour or may be i am just relieved that its all mild. But i am pretty pleased with this poeṃ. mildly, that is to say.
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Up With Orpheus
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2024-02-08 Such a vivid wide poem. First i read, then i look up stuff on internet to connect with the words. Its hard work. Then i get to relish the poem.Cool
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REFLECTION
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2024-02-08 Ahesome...
i like the phrase" powerful need". it holds so many meanings within itself and all in the "now"
A beautiful beautiful poem, indeed, Allen.
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IN VASTLY DIFFERENT WAYS
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2024-02-07 oh yes... Allen, awesomely beautiful and so so elegant.
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A Song Sung Blue
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2024-01-29 Truly,
even i feel likle dropping everything and just hear him.
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Happy one year babe!... i think
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2024-01-26 phew!
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always
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2023-12-26 oh! dear
what a beautiful beautiful poem...the joy of missing but not missing because you feel how you feel- an always and forever presence that missing comes as surprise,sometimes.
Thank you for this one.
Merry Christmas, even if i am a day or two late.
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Lust & Hunger
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2023-12-20 Ah! truly and so so very inspirational.
A true poem and a beautiful one at that.
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On The Whole's Identityless Consciousness
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2023-12-17 so many phrases to note here. Your metaphors are a school in themselves.
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