| EGO ON POETBAY
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2006-06-28
Sure, i am open to discussions. No problem Arti, no worries.
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| Heavenly Scrolls: In Memory of Mattie J.T. Stepanek.
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2006-06-21
This is a genuine, heartbreaking piece filled with love and admiration and beauty. I had seen Mattie on some talkshows and he as well as his poetry was amazing. Thank you for keeping his memory alive. We need more people like you in the world. Keep it up, Shas.
Luv,
Mischa.
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| Beslan Angel 186
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2006-05-29
What a breath-taking and passionate poem. Just picturing the scene brings me almost to tears. It is truly stunning your portrayal of such a heart-wrenching tale.
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| Burning City Sunset
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2006-05-28
This is so captivating. The images are rich and breath-taking. Its unfortunate about your city, but the way you portray the issue is beautifully done. Awesome poem.
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| The Black Halo
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2006-05-17
This poem is so emotionally enthraling and heartbreaking. I love the changing rhythms. Brilliant as always :)
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| lost in vain
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2006-05-12
This poem is so enthralling and so vividly grasps that feeling of helplessness, and that feeling that we can't restrain. I love it.
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| what are we
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2006-05-12
This is so emotional, touching, brilliant. I can feel the rawness oozing from the words, captivating me. This is a great poem.
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| emo 2
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2006-05-07
bring on the emos. lol u portray it so well
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| power
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2006-05-07
i love it!
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| power
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2006-05-07
i love it!
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| Hello, This Is The One of Me
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2006-05-03
this is both a beautiful and comical poem to me, i luv it
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| Give My Heart Back
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2006-05-03
to love someone and not let them know u even exist is somethini know about. this is so beautiful and touching
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| Carousel of Doom
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2006-05-03
another raw and emotional poem.
"pin your wings onto shadows of broken dreams" i love that!
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| Six Feet To Peace
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2006-05-03
this is so raw and intense! i can totally feel it in my skin, it is awesome
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| It's Time, My Son
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2006-05-03
is a beautifuly executed, flow of thought poem that gives the reader an outside view of a man looking in
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| Next Departure To Hell Leaves At Old Oak
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2006-05-03
the twist of this poem left me reeling. what starts off as a brilliant piece of descriptive happiness twists in horror when all the events are known. u have such an imagination
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| You Push, I Slip
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2006-05-03
i agree. this poem is a creative, powerful and brilliant piece of poetry that totally blew me away. i have no idea how u can continuous write poems of such great quality but i hope u continue too. excelent.
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| Gosh Darn It, Love Is...
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2006-05-03
this is the sweetest thing i've ever read. its so beautiful, it makes girls envious of other girls whose bfs treat them this way. its also very funny. what talent! i adore u and ur poems, wow!
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| Death Cab For My Love
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2006-05-03
this poem is truly mesmerizing but as u say a death cad for ur love, i can't help but think if she's dying and u the cab is her way of getting to heaven....this is one of my favourite poems
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| Classic Teenage Date
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2006-05-03
i absolutely LOVE this poem. this is such as you say a classic teenage moment, its great how u can bring life and poetry so closely together. it makes for an awesome poem. love it alot.
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| Off With His Heart!
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2006-05-03
ditto. no one can tell the heart who to fall in love with. the way u can capture the attention of the reader tho, is jus wow. u are really, really good.
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| The Four Seasons
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2006-05-03
i agree wholeheartedly, this poem jus has that enchanting quality that keeps u wrapped up in it til the very end. u are so good.
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| Clouds Of December
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2006-05-03
i've been reading these poems of urs and they are fantastic. u have great talent in the way u can describe such beauty effortlessly. your imagery is amazing.
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| The Pink Spider
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2006-05-03
this poem is so cute! the pink spider as love is so brilliant and creative.
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| Dirty Pretty Thing
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2006-05-03
this is absolutely the most beautiful poem i have ever read. it feels so sorrowful. the imagery in this poem is breathtaking. i love it.
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| bitches
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2006-05-03
this is so funny, it made me snicker a bit
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| emo
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2006-05-03
i'm an emo kid and i can relate!
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from USA