| First Time
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2020-04-04
amd you try your best! Keep going😊
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| How Can I?
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2020-01-19
Great post dear poet😊keep on writing😀
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| the last tear
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2020-01-08
Your love echoes in your words, my dear mom
wherever he is now I know he's happy in the arms of our GOD
in heaven. Be strong and keep going.
I'm glad your back. I miss you so much!
Love,
Haseenwhel
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| Twilight
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2009-06-15
Nice poem dear..i love the movie "twilight"
at the same time
i love your work...
Thank's for sharing
Love,
haseen
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| I Am Who I Am
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2008-05-07
Absolutely Great! just be yourself!love it..thank you for sharing..kisses
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| A Bitter Pill.
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2008-04-25
What a sad poem, my brother pass away at the age of 23...He's too young and he's dream is gone away like a wind but now I realized it's all GOD's will ...thank's for sharing!!!kisses
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| Haseen Ruttain*
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2008-04-23
Beautiful winds....
These beautiful winds when blow and touch me, I remember one complaint before they come, and after the leave, if these winds stay for ever, then for sure there will be only one person, who will rule my heart.
...like the rhyme.. thank's for sharing
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| The end of sorrows
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2008-04-14
i love the last stanza...great write dear poet!!keep it up!!!
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| My friends at Poetbay
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2008-04-14
Hi I miss you Gurl...
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| Comment on Jeherico's 'Focus on poetbay survival'
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2008-04-14
"We are all specialists in our own way"
....yah I agree...thank you for sharing this....
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| For you I feel
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2007-06-27
Hi dear sis!!once again this is a lovely write!!!!miss you!!!!kissess
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| Miracles Made (a story of giving)
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2007-05-08
HI there mom...I love the piece from the start up to the end...
I miss you much===great work==Kissess****Haseen Whel**
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| The battle inside
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2007-03-30
GrEat job!!!!just always turn right!!!!!kissess
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| Perhaps
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2007-02-20
Your heart is always burning like your love irresistable!!!!very nice poem my dear mom!!!!always==haseen===kissess
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| The Bay ( a message for a couple of friends)
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2006-09-18
A very beautiful poem!!!thank you so much for including me here!!!!we are all united here on bay!!!!thank you so much for sharing!!!!kissess
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| To say You Are Alright!!!
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2006-09-18
Hi there My sista Cindy!!!!A million thanks to you for your care and for your love..thank you so much..like what I've said before I have a sick thats why I need to take a rest...Sorry for not visiting your page and the other poem ..Im so sorry!!!Iam here always like GOD always there for you!!!remember I miss your friendship and the bay!!!!love you and thank you so much for this lovely poem!!!!this is my favorites!!!!kissess==forever me==
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| Wishing
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2006-09-13
How I wish to become a star so that I always watching you when you feel sad..I always there to shine over you!!!!!i love this poem!!!!kissess
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| UNDERSTAND
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2006-09-13
I will understand you my dear lovenight...this is very nice provoking thoughts!!!!kissess
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| We Never Seperated
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2006-09-13
Very nice done!!!!I miss you...kissess
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| Five Years Ago
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2006-09-11
A very sad history that will happened in america...I don't want to remember this day!!!...thank you Mom for sharing!!!!kissess(daughter)
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| Please
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2006-09-11
That's true!!!powerful poem...lovely!!!!kissess
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| "Why Can't I Make My Bed?"
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2006-09-11
I enjoy reading this one...Lot's of fun!!!!kissess(daughter)
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| Summer Heat (in Collaboration with Kathy)
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2006-09-11
A lovely poetry from the two great poetess!!!..very nicely done!!!!kissess
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| In Granchester
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2006-09-11
I love this Zoya...very peaceful place and so is your poem great!!!!thank you for sharing!!!!kissess
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| Chocolate Bliss (Tanka)
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2006-09-11
I love chocolates!!!lovely poem here!!!kissess(daughter)
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| In our head and hands
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2006-09-11
"because the eternity of life
is forever in our hands"
Hi there sis this is very true and beautiful...keep on shining here!!!!kissess
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| labyrinth
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2006-09-09
Yah!so is your poem very difficult but yet amazing!!!!thank you for this!!!kissess
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| 8 letters in the air
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2006-09-09
I like the title....cute poem young lady!!!!kissess
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| I cry today when I remember
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2006-09-09
Great job!!!!kissess
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| A fallen leaf
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2006-09-09
"A prayer to the fallen leaves in the world,
Peace never left you because it helps you sleep, Love never betrayed you because it helps you breathe,This is what God has and gives you, everyday"
...I like it and the special thoughts you put here..thank you again for sharing,,this is one of your best..beautiful!!!!kissess
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| The Wild West In the Hood (A thug's Life)
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2006-09-09
I love the title and the flow very nice!!!well done my friend!!!kissess
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| This is my Plea
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2006-09-09
Thanks for HIM ....a powerful written piece!!!!kissess
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| Two Words from Deep Inside
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2006-09-09
Thank you too girl, for your smiles and for this beautiful poem,...kissess
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| This Is Alienas Birthday by M.A.Meddings
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2006-09-09
Happy happy birthday for our beautiful friend Aliena!!!!...thank you for sharing!!!!kissess
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| The Innocence Of Imagination ~Fantasy's Salvation
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2006-09-09
I just read it again and again!!!!well done!!!kissess(daughter)
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| Her River of Thoughts
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2006-09-09
Very well written, a powerful poem...thank you for sharing your thoughts here Mom!!!!!kissess (daughter)
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| Gift
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2006-09-09
Thats true practice makes you perfect!!!!thanks you for sharing your beautiful gift to us!!!!kissess
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| Demanding demands
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2006-09-09
Keep on shining my sis!!!you are beautiful!!!lovely poem indeed!!!!kissess
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| Too Beautiful ( A poet's ability)
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2006-09-09
This is beautiful poem for my dear Mom!!!I love her and thank you for sharing this Will!!!!kissess
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| Shall I tell you my dream
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2006-09-09
Ok tell me....I love to hear of all that from you!!!very beautiful poem!!!!kissess
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| These Are the Angels of Earth
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2006-09-07
Your thoughts always shining here on bay everyday!!!thank you too for those kind words you've always give...I will cherished it forever!!!love you....=haseen daughter=
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| A Day of Loving
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2006-09-07
I love to say that you are always wow!!!!
....great imaginery, a day of loving that someday your wishes will come true!!!thank you for the love you shared for us!!!kissess(daughter)
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| Good Girl In Me
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2006-09-07
Beautiful write sista!!!!well done!!!!kissess
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| Sweet Memory
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2006-09-06
"I cannot open up my eye's
To watch you fade away"
....very powerful written!!!!beautiful!!!kissess
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| Five years to one day
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2006-09-06
Excellent written!!!I love the last stanza!!!!well done!!!kissess
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| For Zainab, A Fellow Poet
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2006-09-06
Very nice written for a very special girl here on bay!!!!I love zainab she is very nice lady!!!thank you for this!!!!kissess
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| Searching for Beauty
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2006-09-06
I love the last stanza..very honest written!!!!!kissess
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| My Profile ( for all the poets)
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2006-09-06
Im sorry I was very late here!!!how I wish I can hold you and say you are very kind and beautiful...anyway how can I introduce
myself well I am just very simple person and have a very simple dream...thank you very young lady for this very nice profile poe!!!!kissess
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| I say thank you
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2006-09-06
Wonderful written from a wonderful lady!!!!I love you my special girl...you are very beautiful!!!!kissess your bestfriend==haseen===
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| The Update (Congratulations to Johnny Jackson)
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2006-09-06
Congratulation to him!!!!nice poem here!!!!Kissess
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