Eye Color


Brown eyes, as ever-warm, are nice--
Or so I've always felt;
But Christabel's blue eyes are ice--
So fair to see them melt!



Poetry by Rob Graber
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Written on 2016-03-01 at 20:11

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Bob
Love it!!
2016-03-03


Yanto
Every time I clock in here
I find treasure.

This is one

Hi Rob
2016-03-02


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done, Rob. It's tough enough to write a good quatrain, much tougher still to write one which stands and makes sense on its own.
2016-03-02


shells
Found myself thinking of the song " don't it make my brown eyes blue." Your four lines say so much more, beautifully.
2016-03-01



The pacing and syllable-stresses are so pleasantly precise. This reads like a dream. The appeal of color relies so much on the one wearing it. I was always partial to the high drama of blue, but am finding brown eyes deep and rich and full of subtle delights these days.
2016-03-01


Nancy Sikora
Iv felt XactlE the sAm.
2016-03-01