F.i.in.e Moods
oh to have our trust and love trampled on... it soars and builds the worse feelings ever... you get those feelings across very well with your acrostic... very real and easy to identify to this... hope alls well :f

later... xx
2006-05-27

Amanda Manmohan
I hope that such a horrible thing did not actually happen to you... it's a brilliant poem, but something awful to have to go through. You expressed your emotions blatantly and with ease. Well done :)
2006-05-26

Kathy Lockhart
This reaches deep within and calls up very real and raw emotions. Biting, Gripping, Intense! Wow! kathy
2006-05-26

Pamela A Lamppa
Truly this is the tragic ouch and betrayal in the heart and sould. A peferctly penned acrostic. I love it when they rhyme. :o) Well done. ~Pam
2006-05-26

Tell me this is pure poetry and nothing you have had to personally experience.
That rips the heart out.
Good write about a very bad situation. Ricky
2006-05-26

lastromantichero
wow Graham this is so heart rending the pain in this is obvious but its a powerful piece rgds mike
2006-05-26