Caution: ANGST. Draft form. May be unpublished and/or rewritten soon.


Bad Day


Such a simple statement
But it hurts to say it hurts

To admit it is to be subject
To further injury, added insult
Scorn and Spite

So I'm torn
Every damn horrific time
I see stubbly remainders
Masquerading as worth

Parading the pathetic facts:
An unpoetic, ugly-crying
Sub-original, emphatically
Sad
Sad
Sad
Crying Mess

And it hurts




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Written on 2018-11-11 at 03:29

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one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I keep coming back to this. It's a short story w/o the descriptors and exposition. There is a lot to be read between the lines. It's hard to leave it alone, wondering about the story—and at the same time relating to it.
2018-11-14



Puff... puff... puff... puff... HUG! :>)
2018-11-12