Good Morning

So much
i don't tell
but it shows,
my love.

In how....

so much about you
lingers in and around me
as a whiskey in my veins
after the rocks
have long melted.



Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2026-09-09 at 06:02

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Ye keep finding new ways to write about love. Goated.
2026-09-10


Artorius
This poem speaks right to my heart, thank you for sharing it with us.
2026-09-09



No need for a formal critique-

This poem speaks.
And I love it!

Very nice, Sona--
The last line fits so superbly well and is a perfect closure.
2026-09-09