interior scene

 

 

marketa is reading

i'm typing

listening to some fine music

 

lin is off with her beau

up to no good

i hope

 

the atmosphere is different

overcast

softening the light

 

for the first evening

since july

the heat is lessening a bit 

 

domestic tranquility belies

inner fragility

 

 

 

 





Poetry by one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2026-09-10 at 12:43

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Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Your poem has been chosen to be featured on the home page of PoetBay. Thank you for posting on our poetry website!
2026-09-14


Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
oh my!
whats simmering!
Truly enjoyed this one

I actually like the last stanza. It came as a blow.
2026-09-11


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
The lines "up to no good i hope" made me smile. Something is in the air, perhaps?
2026-09-11


Rob Graber
Intriguingly foreboding conclusion!
2026-09-10


Melinda K Zarate The PoetBay support member heart!
Very lovely poem. There is a quiet relief that comes with the ease of extreme heat. Life seems more tranquil in the transition.
2026-09-10


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Honestly, everything about this poem is charming as hell but that third stanza is something fookin special.
2026-09-10