One to twenty-three


One two three
I am here you and me

four five six
I love you

seven eight nine
shine baby shine

ten eleven twelve
ourselws together here and now

thirteen fourteen fifteen
I want you and you want me

Sixteen seventeen eighteen
is great to be with you

Twenty twenty-one twenty-two
oh my beloved one I love you

twenty-three
always together, you and me





Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-08-06 at 20:43

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Will
nicely Expressed.
Very much enjoyed the read..
2006-08-07


Teala
Lovely, what a cute and quirky write!
2006-08-07


Zachary P. B.
Beautiful Dan. =)

I loved the numbers and the everpresent love-filled tone, but the words and perspective changed a little. Was this on an anniversary perhaps? Maybe I'm just loony. Anyways, it was spectacular.

Z
2006-08-06


Troll
that's so sweet.. you probably put a smile on someone's face with this :)
2006-08-06