I wrote this in high school (apx 15 years ago). I still like it and my teacher at the time loved it. I thought it would be a good poem to start my membership with.


Death in Winter

Gray snow spirals downward.
The mourners cling together,
They cry for the precious Heather.
Her porcelain skin, cold as metal
and violet lips, posed in a frozen kiss.

The chilled waters stole her life,
robbed her grace,
ended her youth.
Stone faced friends, heart broken lovers
shocked from the truth.

Ocean waters beckoned to her, enticed and seduced.
Angels cried to see the amount to which she was reduced.

Reaching to the east she wailed,
yearning to join her love.
He was taken away that winter on a ship.
They believed he now rested abouve.

Dear Heather crazed with longing journeyed into the deep.
It shook the mountains to see how the heavens did weep.

Upon the horizon yesterday a ragged man did appear.
The only sorrowful words he uttered were
"I'm back Heather dear".




Poetry by Jessica Rexroat
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Written on 2006-09-03 at 00:05

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PrincessPebbles
Well done! It's just so beautiful!
2006-11-18


J. E.
I simply love the feel of this!
2006-10-02


Kathy Lockhart
so much depth in this poem. it goes deep and chilling into the bone like the death of winter. Evocative write! kathy
2006-09-06


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Does this not make you gasp with its shocking beauty? It's like a finely cut diamond, each facet reflecting new brilliance and color.
2006-09-04


keith nunes
haunting ode. great job
2006-09-03


Cr4Ky
welcome to the poetbay!
and indeed you choose a great entry!
a thrilling poetic story!

left me mouring Heather..
2006-09-03


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Really enjoyed the read, wonderful twist at the end. Great first entry, look forward to reading more. Welcome to the bay.
2006-09-03