Just a poem


Who called my name

Who called my name?
When I was thinking to change
From good to bad
And bad to worse
Walking so alone
Staring at the moon
Shadows were back of me
When I turned there was no one
Silently thinking and walking
What I'm going to do is it right
When I already know it is wrong
When I also know before I wasn't like that
A simple, honest and truthful girl I was
A girl who never dare to lie
If she would, she would cry
Until all the leaves would dry
Remembering the way I was
That moment I changed my mind
Hearing the claps which were given to me
Bravos and hugs which I felt deep in my bones
Kisses on my dimple cheeks
Sweet words hearing in my ears
The light surrounding me
I believed the Angels were with me
Because who can call my name
When I was thinking to change
From good to bad
And bad to worse
Walking so alone
Staring at the moon
Shadows were back of me
When I turned there was no one
It wasn't a dream
Who could call my name?
What I felt and believed
The Angels called my name




Poetry by Zainab
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Written on 2006-09-26 at 10:31

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Zainab
Thanks to everyone for the comments here
I appreciate
2006-09-27


Zachary P. B.
it feels good to see people on a path, or angels in our lives... the gloom sometimes settle in us too...

but we have hearts, hopes, fears, desires...

and love.

loneliness is subjective, like everything else...

wonderful job. =)
z
2006-09-26


Zoya Zaidi
It some how reminds me of Virginia Woolf's Stream of Consciousness style of writing.
Well Done, dear Zaini.
((Hugs))
Love,
Zoya
2006-09-26


wee2souls
beautiful words wow:)
lovely just like the poet
herself:)
hugs
cindy
2006-09-26