Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is soooo good. It is a profound Truth!! It is how love really is.
2007-11-26

Zoya Zaidi
Indeed! OoooH! I love this!
((Hugs))
Love,
Zoya
2007-11-17

Dan Cederholm
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Wonderful written dear Kathy!!!

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2007-11-17

lastromantichero
Youpoetry ooszes the love you feel and in engenders the lolve i feel for thee it is a wonderful feeling and you have described it so beautifully xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxylk Michael.
2007-11-16

Rob Graber
I can't resist adding: For me, this poem achieves a profound universality because the opening "we" reads BEAUTIFULLY in three ways: it can refer not only to the two separated lovers, but also to all of us as individuals seeking love, or even to all of humanity "waiting to become one" as a social group. Again, BRAVO!
2007-11-16

Rob Graber
Set as it is in the indefinite future, this has such a longing kind of beauty... it is religiously romantic in a way that an atheist can appreciate...
2007-11-16

Elle
separation is always hard and takes time to adjust I find - I like the idea of being a fragment in space just waiting to catch up with the other part of me

Elle x
2007-11-16

liz munro
Simply BRILLENT.

L.
2007-11-16