Dust to Dust

How often I have felt in so many places
That once it was yours, along a street
Of old houses, the faded chinked brick,
The shapes of late afternoon shadows,
Curtains fluttering in an open window
Like a caged bird lifting but never leaving,
Faint light in an upstairs bedroom window
Where later, in the middle of the night,
The moon will pause in front of a mirror
And a gray face will glimmer and fade,
In the webby attic a trunk of a child's clothes
Never worn, pictures turned to the wall,
Down the steep stairs to the dirt cellar,
Dim jars holding a long-neglected garden,
The late sun sifting through a window
And dying into the deep settled dust.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-04-14 at 00:32

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Amazing imagery and beautifully described.
luvestix
2011-05-24


Doreen Cavazza
I love the emotions this brings on. It gives a melancholy feeling that's wonderful. Memories come flooding in when I read this. Again, you're a master at putting words together in order to bring visual memories and it's wonderful.
2011-04-20



A melancholy collection of imagery.
2011-04-15


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
one should not dwell too long in the many places :)
there are other places :)
i very much enjoy how you describe things.
and the humour.
2011-04-15


Rob Graber
I feel I have been introduced to a feeling I have had without quite having recognized it before; very effective!
2011-04-14



I was reading this as I prepared for work early this morning and thought that I had responded to it in the comment box. Obviously not. A thought about my allergy to dust came about and it being triggered mostly in the 'attic' and like places. There is a kind of death or a dormancy of life, a transfixation, if you will... it could be poignant, haunting, or filled with sepia toned memoirs. Can you tell I am liking this poem? :-)
2011-04-14