The underlying meaning of the poetry challenge(if it's a crime)and the result!
The pantheon decided to take away three things from humanity but Love Goddesses wanted to give a chance to the humanity to prove their strength.So the gods allowed the 9 Muses to inspire poets in order to see how humans would react in that decision(to forbid love, desire and faith).
And so be it, 15 poets got inspired and wrote poems, at the poetry challenge if it's a crime. The result of the challenge made Gods realize that they could never win.
The 15 poets saved the World with their passion and writing skills!
Each contribution in the poetry challenge is equaly important!
We have saved the World boys and girls!Now all mortals can continue living their lifes, falling in love, feeling desire and faith!
Here is the result of the poetry challenge
by: Ange1a 2006-07-23
If it's a crime to Love you,
Then...
I am guilty.
If it's a crime to want you,
Then...
I am guilty.
If it's a crime to believe in you,
Then...
I am guilty.
I place myself upon the mercy of the Court,
hold my heart in my hands, and cry...
by: Lourdes 2006-07-23
If it's a crime to Love you
Then I will spend my life writing your name on every stone
If it's a crime to want you
Then I will steal your hands while you're sleeping
If it's a crime to believe in you
Then I am a criminal , my love
Escaping in your every word
by: Malin Johansson 2006-07-23
It is a crime to love you
when the forbidden thoughts
becomes to lovely actions
It is a crime to love you
when truth can not be heard
and it becomes silently unspoken
for the crime, the love for not to be broken
by: night soul woman 2006-07-23
The unspoken truth is the
sweater unravelled mystery
of sacred love
When the sacred words
I love you, I want you,
I believe in you
are spoken then shall
no law forbid love to flourish
Universal love shall
prevail and conquer
Do We Then Make Void
the Law Through Faith?
God Forbid: Yea, We Establish the Law
What shall we say then?
Shall we continue in sin,
that grace may abound?
No human-made law
can prevent the transcedental
power of love to exist
by: Liam(CB) 2006-07-23
If it's a crime to Love you
Then I am guilty as indicted
If there's punishment for that crime
It would be my love was unrequited
If it's a crime to want you
Then I stand rightly accused
If Law decreed this is a crime
It will forever be abused
If it's a crime to believe in you
Then my faith must be on trial
If I renounced my love for you
Then my crime is one of denial
by: Aliena 2006-07-23
If it's a crime to love you,
then I would sit as judge
severely dressed in black.
You would sit on the plaintiff's side
on the defendant's side - she
Glacier- blue eyes
all drenched in tears
would plead her guilt
And I would condemn her, darling,
to life-long nearness to you
without mercy
(Justice is so fucking corrupt in this country)
by: Troll 2006-07-23
Your Criminal
If it's a crime to love you
Then my fate, it has been sealed
For you are my disease
And you simply can't be healed
If it's a crime to want you
I'm already in a cage
Locked within my mind, with you
Eternal dreamy stage
If it's a crime to believe in you
A willing convict, I will be
If only I could just have faith
That you believe in me
If it's wrong, I want to be wrong
For it's never felt so right
Because all I want to be is this:
Your criminal tonight
by: Daybreaker 2006-07-23
If it's a crime to love you
then let all the bars around the world surround me.
If it's a crime to want you
then I'll be sentenced to death
again and again.
by: kid 2006-07-24
If it's a crime to believe in you
then I'm a prisoner in your veins.
if it is a crime to love u
let the cop come and arrest mi
If it is a crime to want u
Then slap mi twice
If it is crime to believe in u
Well u cant do anything to dat?
Or can you
by: Thomas Perdue 2006-07-23
Though thy beauty is more deadly
Than the sharpest of daggers
And more lethal than
The strongest of poisions
I shall always want you!
Oh! If it's a crime to want you
Then what shall the punishment be?
For me, nothing!
For I shall have you!
As strong as thy deadly gaze be
There shall be no punishment,
For there is no punishment for deadmen!
But if I shall not have you
Then I shall still want you.
The punishment shall be worth enduring
Just for the chance to drink of your poison
Or have your dagger thrust through my heart!
by: Arti 2006-07-23
Bliss
If its a crime to love you
Then bring on your shackles of metal
This is the one crime blest by my soul
This is so beautiful, so rich, so vital.
If its a crime to want you
Then bring on the wrath of your hounds
I shall let loose the power of passionate desire
I shall be forever free, mangled and bound.
If its a crime to believe in you
Then send me to the death gallow
Where with my final dying gasping breath
I shall teach love to the devil below.
I'm guilty of all these crimes, beloved,
Punish me with just a moment's tender kiss
The world may consign me then to eternal flames
And watch me burn in eternally kissed bliss...
by: KJC 2006-07-23
Is it a crime to believe in you?
To give you hugs and love you
For who you are and what you say
To compliment you sincerely form the heart
even though I am stranger with no mask
As I have no hidden agenda
only to be a kind loving friend
as I am not seeking romance
nor am I seeking flirtatous cheeky love
I just want to comment and believe in you
to show you my sincere practical love
in visiting your page and thanking you to
in kindness showing you that I care
by the things I read everyday
then in returned thanks with you I share
Is it a crime to believe in you?
by: Kathy Lockhart 2006-07-24
If it's a crime to believe in you, then I am a prisoner of injustice. If It's a crime to support you, I will give all I have. If its a crime to profess your innocents, I will yell it from the rooftops. If its a crime to fight for your freedom, I will die for you. If it's a crime to believe in you, I will stand behind the bars and scream your name until my voice is silenced! I will do this for you, because you are my brother, my sister, my son, my daughter, my mother, my father, my neighbor, my friend, in fact you are my nephew, David Camm! I will do it for you because you are innocent!
By lastromantichero
If it's a crime to Love you
Then I plead guilty
To the gentle adoration in my heart
Guilty to the worship of you
If it's a crime to want you
Then sentence me
To a life time of longing
The endless longing for you
If it's a crime to believe in you
Then take the words I've said
That made you doubt I did
And burn my tongue
Then despite this inappropriate
Endearment
Just believe that my friendship
Is love and is yours always
by: haseen whel 2006-07-25
If it is a crime to love,to want and to believe you...
then I Think I finally die......
Poetry by night soul woman
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Written on 2006-07-24 at 19:45
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