May I Take Your Coat Or Maybe Even Your Heart?

The first time I saw you,
From across the room,
You saw me from across the room.
Slowly we made our way to each other.
weaving in and out of the people of the party.
We reach each other in the middle.
All smiles no words.
Im speachless.
You can't find the courage.
We can both agree
it love at first sight.
the first words are spoken
to our amazement.
im to focused on how much i already love you,
to notice you've asked if you can take my coat.
i hand it to you.
be careful....
my heart is in it's pocket.




Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-10-22 at 04:58

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whisperinvoiz
reminds me of the funny beginings of all love stories. good work.
cheers!
2007-06-24


Kathy Lockhart
This is amazing. Those are the sweetest words, "my heart is in its pocket."
2006-10-22


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is so sweet, cute and cleaver! It made me smile. Mammy
2006-10-22

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The Sweetest Things
by Valerie