Desperate Moment

Blood drops from branches
Across grotesque bars moonlight
Strangles for a breath

Haiku by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-08-22 at 11:05

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Ivan R
Not only a perfect 5-7-5 verse haiku, it is a vivid, and thick poem,

vivid in its life force, thick in its density ... what to make of it, I do not know, but what I got from it was a great sense of someone that truly understands the different levels of being*

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Dark, despairing, I could feel that chill and fear - like when a storm rolls in and you feel all restless

Elle x


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