Current Mood:  for some weird reason, an ex popped in mind...

Current Music:  "Tweeter and the Monkeyman" - The Traveling Wilburys

 

NOTE:  2022 05 06  13H40 EST  You & I - 




You & I

 

- lack of self-confidence can alter your decision-making abilities...

 

You're exactly right

When you point out

That I'll see the good

In people before any

Bad sides about them.

 

That's exactly what

Happened between us.

I stuck around longer

Than I should've to see

Your good sides instead

 

Of trusting my initial

Intuitions about you.

Wonder if you realize it:

Your gripe highlights

Precisely why you and I 

 

Should've never been.

This 'flaw' did me no

Favors, that's for sure,

You're absolutely right for

This instance, I concede.





Diary by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2022-05-06 at 19:43

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j'essayerais bien de dire quelque chose d'intellllligent au sujet de ton poème mais tout est dit dans ton poème...je comprends la situation. parfois les émotions prennent le pas sur la réflexion: quand on n'aime pas, on n'aime pas
2022-05-07


Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
I always wonder why people treat us this way,
I think sometimes they crave being in charge.
They'll never have what you have, self esteem.
Have a good night's sleep and a great weekend.
My friend F.M (hey that rhymes)
Huge hugs and XXX regards Alan
2022-05-07


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this. "Nobody more clearly reflects what you say is my bad judgment than you."
2022-05-06