| So thats who i am not??
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2007-11-03
I like it! This is really good,
how you introduce yourself in a poem like that.
And I love the whole question-thing.
It's great.!
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| Pretty Little Woman, Fly
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2007-10-25
this sounds like a song and I really like it!
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| Which gun will you take up, my friend?
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2007-09-15
Oh, this was a very strong poem.
It's really sad.
and we all know remember 11th september,
there's no good words for that day.
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| Fight Me
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2007-08-17
I love your rhymes, your very good at it.
Sometimes it's easier for me to rhyme in english than in swedish, but it's hard to get a real feeling.
But you don't have the same problem as I have, it's such a good flow in this poem. I love that I can see a boxing ring in my mind whit two persons who's fighting but I also see very much love.
You're a good poet.
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| Stars in My Sky
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2007-07-22
oh, this was such a great poem!
It's written with such a great flow.
I like how you describe nature, because
I think USA is a beautiful country
(where do you live?)
and the message and the story
in this poem is amazing
you shall be satisfied
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| Because You Know That They Care
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2007-07-11
My dad left me and my family for seven years ago. I know how it feels like. And my dad is also my inspiration, to be a good human.
Even if they're not alive they can be inspirations. It's good to have one.
I think this poem was really good
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from Sweden 