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Breaking News

2018-06-25
yes, like a breaking dawn the future is right ahead of you as the skies open their arms to you and the clouds warm up to you watching the sun rushing to you to kiss you as the winds carry you to ride the jet stream. Beautiful words, Ashe.


Together as two

2018-04-11
a very intriguing read.


Screaming Under Water

2018-04-09
Oh my God! You are very special Ashe! i am still under shock to make much sense! you are special and very precious! keep safe!


LIFE CAN BE SO DIFFICLT! (Basede On A Conversation I Had While Waiting For The Loop)

2018-04-04
yes, very true. To be productive is good but so much better is to be of some use. i like being useful and one always is. very nice poem, Ken. i totally get it. Thanks for always being here on poet bay.


To know that face

2018-04-04
this poem is amazingly beautiful and very lovely! wish i had written it!


Bits of Life

2018-03-23
Very nice style of writing epiphanies in verse. And so beautifully done.
Yes, let them in.


Solid Soul Love.

2018-03-21
Beautiful, stay blessed!


book

2018-03-21
ha ha


Own

2018-03-21
yes, we would! in nature, we rest.


Why?

2018-02-12
this is deep. let me first immerse myself in the poem.


KISS ME WITH YOUR EYES

2018-02-07
very nice idea


WE THAT WRITE!

2017-12-08
oh yes! and if the critics were to read it! what a happy laugh we would have at their cost!


Laughing Out Loud

2017-12-08
"Minnie Grace was a curious, rare creature
From a scarcely believable world,
Where love; Where fun; Where story,
Where all that was foreign in us, flourished."

it is always good when we visit such lands with our guests.
we also enjoyed the journey. lovely!
and yes..how we laugh ..when we laugh!


Yin/Yang

2017-12-05
so good to read this poem today when my heart is without a frown and am more like a clown! lovely read.


I miss you

2017-09-19
Please tell him or may be just told him. Beautiful


THE LOVE OF FRIENDSHIP! - MATESHIP!

2017-09-11
Ha ha very well said


WHEN STUMPED FOR WORDS!

2017-09-07
Yes, snapshots of life going unnoted. Yes, Ken.


a lone saturday in august

2017-08-26
Strong imagery of August, of you and September. Ending on a peaceful note as we all desire. Tomorrow full of peace, as we all hope for we d tide over the storms of today or the storms will themselves wane..

( side thought -but want about the destruction or the threat of destruction these storms entail. I guess We are warned in advance and we take all measures to protect ourselves. We do.)


Life or Death?

2017-08-24
Death or life,
Which is the grearter perplexer?

very true
we live life... forever in its arms and we all have to meet death and rest in its lap.

A beautiful read.. very layered


I Remember You

2017-08-23
Tender and true...always and forever
So sad and yet love makes it so beautiful for us to read.


Would You Believe me?

2017-08-22
its only for a while, you say
but stars are forever and always. if not forever, then may be always! may be this is how good as it gets! or may be it gets better! beautiful words


Sex in the Laboratory

2017-08-22
ha ha turn to Ah Ah and then to Aha and Awww


A Little While More

2017-08-22
it will stay! But no point being stubborn, if it has to go, let go but why not a wee bit longer! why not?


Inside A Hospital Room

2017-08-22
Oh Ashe! Heal well! Yes, it is life supporting to find desire arriving one day. take care. you have written a beautiful Poem with an evocative imagery. Please get well soon!


Star Man

2017-08-22
so so beautiful and how i have missed your words ( as i have been away). Beautiful. stars and constellations. wow!!! who can beat that. people who look up and guide you to another world, waiting to be discovered by you. Lovely!


WHEN A FREIEND APPEARS TO BE GONE!

2017-08-22
Ken, sometimes the leaving is sudden and sometimes it is gradual over a period of time. And one just wakes up to find that the person who was real and present once or you thought so was really there has long left but you have only realised now.
Keep writing! Be easy!


After All Has Been Broken

2017-02-08
A poem is a beautiful way to make sense of what is and to accept it as one's own. The comments on your poem also added dimensions and facets to the poem, making it a classic one. A beautiful poem, Ashe.


A Wonder

2017-02-08
And I love the way you write this


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-19
I don't know what to say. I don't understand it as yet. May be a little bit I do but don't want to. Can't say. It is taking all of my body to react to your words. Will take some time and come back to you, Ashe


The Tin Man

2016-11-12
Maybe you are not able to hear it... but it's throbbing and very much inside you... your sweetheart


The Myth of Love

2016-10-24
Profound words, Ashe! Yes, so much is wasted in love! Such suffering and I fail to understand- for what purpose? And why do we choose to suffer with such stubbornness. We wait for magic to happen and that everything will be so magical and light again.
We can still be soft and kind even if love has failed us. Soft and tender!!!!
I don't know how much sense do I make. Nothing seems to make sense to me anymore. I guess our soul is our guide, if we repose our faith in it and not be bullied by our minds.


Early Morning

2016-09-29
Beautiful Beautiful Poem
Morning Rhythm
I enjoyed it so much


The river

2016-09-29
I loved reading your poem. A true indulgence it has been. Thanks for the repost


From a Gas Station

2016-09-21
Voices. I am mad about voices. The voice tells me everything - just the voice.
Lovely poem


I Remember

2016-09-21
Words listen to you and come flowing towards you. A magical tale told in a beautiful way... the words fall ever so softly that while my heart breaks, these words hold me and cushion me too. Lovely, Ashe


THEY SAY IT's A GIFT!

2016-09-01
Ha ha !! But why curses!!! Poems are so unique.


Thank you for being you.

2016-09-01
A poem is meant to be beautiful and it is so beautiful. Heart rending and heart warming beautiful


Loose Screws

2016-09-01
Appreciate the honesty with which this poem has been written. I am lost for words but not thoughts. It requires immense courage to see as -it is. We know ourselves And we are so close/ intimate and in touch with ourselves. Loved your poem.


Short on time

2016-08-31
Beautiful! I loved your poem and the words you had to say!


What I think about

2016-08-31
Yes, think about these things. A beautiful poem.


A Mother's Dream

2016-08-30
Oh Kathy! So much pain there is for a mother, for a loving heart. Take care and hugs. A Mother's heart is a safe place for a child of forty years


The Addiction Epidemic

2016-08-30
The words and poem convey your anguish.
"The simplest life is the happiest life."


An illicit rendezvous

2016-08-23
Enjoyed your play with words


Your impression.

2016-08-11
Yes, sweet meandering of words flowing in your poem. A lovely read.


WORDS SAID MISUNDERSTOOD

2016-08-11
Yes, words sometime complicate. One should just play with them.


WORDS SAID MISUNDERSTOOD

2016-08-11
Yes, words sometime complicate. One should just play with them.


Dolphin

2016-08-02
A lovely poem and a Wonderful read.


smoke and ash

2016-08-01
The words that hold us steady!Thank you words for coming and shaping the poem, which rises from the charred remains. A beautiful poem.


AWAITING

2016-07-31
What is it? Hopefully we d soon know.


on fortitude

2016-07-29
A lesson to remember
To know quiet contentment
and singleminded fortitude

Love these words
Beautiful poem.