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Nabeela Altaf

25 years old from Pakistan


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and the band plays on

2019-06-28
This poem says so much in just a few lines. Very well done. This is an artistic piece.


THERE WILL ALWAYS BE WORDS

2019-06-24
I love this! Truly, there will always be a word for every feeling or situation. Bookmarked :)


His Laboratory

2017-12-19
Powerful. Makes me look at photography differently.


To the bullets

2014-12-11
Powerful!


It's Like Sleeping In The Lost&Found Dept. Because

2014-11-20
Seriously, this blew me away.


Tis Almost Winter Are We Discontened?

2014-11-17
I love winter!


I am a Woman

2014-10-14
Of course you can do anything; you're a woman :)


TC Purry

2014-10-14
He's a cutie.


What The Gnat Who Took A Vow Of Silence Said.

2014-09-13
Hahaha!!


Meet Tuxedo Cat

2014-09-11
Awww so cute.
Is this poem based on true events? :P


Bacterium Arcana

2014-09-10
Brilliant choice of words. You baffle me.


FEW ARE THE BEST TO HAVE

2014-09-09
A friend is someone who never gets in your way unless it's the way down.


I HAVE THIS SHIP

2014-09-09
I think you will love Sarah Kay's 'Ghost Ship'. This poem is written quite well, although a bit rough at the edges.


When The Child Is Born

2014-09-08
Perfect! This prose reminds me so much of my favourite poet's writing; Sarah Kay.


What A Leaf Does In The Fall.

2014-09-07
Hahaha!! :D


SPINNING PLAITS

2014-09-07
I like the metaphor! Awesome piece. Brilliant clarity.


The Mute Child

2014-09-06
Beautiful. This poem plays wonderful images in my head!


Tall Beeches On Red Hill

2014-09-05
Captured very well!


Why Did The Hydra Drink So Much H2o?

2014-08-25
Haha awesome!


Why The Kangaroo Couple Adopted A Sexually Ambivalent Male Plains Buffalo

2014-08-24
You just keep getting better and better at this!!!


Ballad Of A Thin Woman

2014-08-21
Beautiful.


HE LOOKED AT IT

2014-08-17
What?


Why The Marionette Who Could Not Fall In Love Fell

2014-08-17
Awesome! You, sir are great! with puns.


Exmoor Pony

2014-08-16
I love it! You really know how to play with words :))


One Drop At A Time

2014-08-16
Amazing!


Lowritta

2014-08-16
Amazing use of words! But I didn't really get the pun...if there's any.


How A Pearl Keeps A Secret

2014-08-15
This is so punny! I love it!


It's So

2014-08-13
A very beautiful story, lovely writing. This poem reminds me of Edith Nesbit's work!


SHE SAID NO! HE SAID YES! (WITH THANKS TO NABEELA ALTAF)

2014-08-12
This is a very important issue which people don't voice.


WORDS CAN COURSE INSTANT ANGER

2014-08-12
Of course! Hazrat Ali has quoted once,"The tongue is like a lion. Let it lose and it causes instant damage."


She Likes Cats

2014-08-12
Lol thank you :p


CastShadows~

2014-08-11
Very different and sophisticated. Your poem gives the reader something to think about :))


DNA Love

2014-08-11
Excellent! Brilliantly written.


Oh Mama

2014-08-11
Brilliant! You have a gift at writing haiku's I must say.


My journey home

2014-08-10
So sweet. Lovely use of words.


Words Without

2014-08-09
Brilliant! I could almost feel the scene unfolding in front of me.


SITING OUT SIDE THE CAFE

2014-08-08
Every person is not an individual but has a world of his own. You listened and you became a part of that world. Listen away mate! It's better than talking :))


Don't close your mouth when you think*revised*

2014-08-08
Very very nice. I especially like the stanza about the air in our lungs. Never really thought about it from that aspect but your poem has my grey matter fluttering!


Faster Than Light

2014-08-08
I love it! Incredibly good writing and thought.


Just In Rhyme

2014-08-08
Awesome :))
You rock with rhymes!


Pandora

2014-08-07
The title of this poem plays marvellous images in my mind. All there was left was hope.


Pandora

2014-08-07
Forgiveness is divine. You are truly a brave person to forgive someone and I know it's really very hard to give mercy to someone you don't want to.


Oh! How I wish and how I know!

2014-08-06
A bit sad but nevertheless a joy to read!


Magnetic Fields

2014-08-06
Opposites do attract but it varies according to every person obviously. For instance, I would downright hate any man who dislikes cats :))


The Never Ending Journey

2014-08-03
This is a marvellous piece of work! It is outstanding how you seem to make the simple designs on a tapestry come to life. Blown away. Good job!


Stars Watch

2014-08-03
The last line is epic.


Wander River

2014-08-02
Maybe Wanderer the River?
This little piece speaks a lot.


Resurrect

2014-08-02
Indeed! A very deep and beautifully written poem. Your haiku's should have a collection!


The Caged Bird that Sang to Freedom

2014-08-01
I have been reading a lot about Maya Angelou recently and I found your poem beautiful. A lovely, heart breaking piece about an extraordinary woman.


No Following

2014-08-01
And a great woman she is! Very well executed.