An attempt to drive movement in the reading of a poem. Please read this aloud and use your voice as the words suggest


Lovers

Pine trees SwWwaaay
And siiiiiiiiigh with murrrrmurrrs
Of gratitude
As the wiIiIiIiIind swiIiIirrRlLls
In gentle strokes to the loving
Touuuuch that bonds themmm
Both.




Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-09-23 at 18:33

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Clever. You kind of force the words to become onomatopoeic. Cool.
2016-09-28



it's like you got a swing in your head!

well done
2016-09-24



I could feel the movement as I read.
Ashe
2016-09-24


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting
2016-09-23



A fine experiment but not up my alley
2016-09-23