Underwater

I see your face

Distorted by water

But as I breathe out,

I see nothing but bubbles

Then everything is gone

And all I see is blue
Ashe~




Poetry by Ashe
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Written on 2017-01-22 at 15:10

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Stark but pure. Perhaps you see better underwater now.
2017-01-31


yoonoos peerbocus
succinct with depth/could be appreciated in multiple ways as poetry usually is
2017-01-25


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A very simple poem which sounds like a metaphor.
2017-01-23


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
maybe that is a good thing (to see only blue?) ~
2017-01-22


shells
A definite depth of feeling here, I'm hoping it's a letting go poem and blue is good.
2017-01-22


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Very well written
I liked the feeling in your words
Thanks for sharing
N T
2017-01-22



This how I feel when politicians are talking.
2017-01-22


KYREUS of Sweden
Few words -
many emotions
2017-01-22



good one, i have enjoyed it
2017-01-22