Undone

I had a sinking feeling in my gut
But the words I could not muster up
The image of you and her sitting upon the martial bed
Did the thought of me even enter your head?

Pandora's box had been opened
Feelings spoke about but they were too hardened
Bringing it all back to the surface and I cannot handle the emotions

Too many questions I have unanswered
Your efforts more and more substandard
The fire in our love fizzled out
From the very moment I started to doubt

I had given you all of my devotion
And you buried it all, all in one motion
You made me talk about the things I had buried deep
You mended me piece by piece

And now I find myself back at the beginning
The love inside of me thinning
Back to square one
Empty and undone



Poetry by DeeDee
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Written on 2017-09-05 at 01:01

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I like that you said that the moment you had doubts, the love fizzled. There should be no doubts in a true relationship. You are better off alone than with an unfaithful partner. The parting is difficult, but the feeling of not thinking about it will be bliss. Well expressed feelings in your poem.
Ashe
2017-09-06


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo, DeeDee.
Ken
2017-09-05