I Cannot Find You

I walked right past you,
After loving you so long,
I was looking the wrong direction
And when I looked back you were gone,

I lost the only reason,
I could find to remain true
Losing sight of how much we shared
And for that, I lost sight of you

I chased after the beam of sunlight
That I knew from years gone by,
And I thought I could forget you,
Never knowing it was a lie,

When a star is chased by so many
And its light begins to fade
With the coming of the morning sun
It so cold here in the shade,

I found my ray of sunshine in you
And like a fool I ran away
Afraid to be complacent
In your warmth, I didn't stay

Now I cannot find you,
You hide somewhere unknown
You are lost to me forever,
Gone forever, leaving me alone.
Ashe




Poetry by Ashe
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Written on 2018-10-28 at 18:25

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Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem is very nice. But very sad, though--by the end. Who, I wonder, is "You," the one "lost to me forever,/ Gone forever, leaving me alone"?

~Ngoc
2019-05-27


Sona
how you rhyme!
i understand.
2019-05-27


KYREUS of Sweden
Heartbreaking.

* CHRIS
2019-02-26


Coo & Co The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes, this is very poignant, Ashe. Members of Coo & Co like the rhymes and we can easily hear the verses sung, in the manner of a ballade, perhaps. A well-written piece :>)
2018-10-30


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I also can relate to this. The rhymes and format seem to enforce the poignant sense of loss. It is very controlled about something beyond control.
2018-10-30


Bibek
I can relate to this. I love its soft and gentle tone with a tinge of remorse in the end.

Bibek
2018-10-29