Me using banal themes and rhymes to express something deeper.


Itís All About The Journey

Black can be pretty dark
Then Light rather bright
Sanity, hold the handrail
You must grip it very tight
Scarcity can be rather rare
So watch out for your stop
Abundance fills a carriage
Some people climb on top
Vagueness is for wandering
For you cannot pin it down
Exactitude, an express route
To get you quickly into town




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Written on 2019-04-10 at 15:12

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I can't say that I get the deeper point, but the poem is quite well constructed, and accompanying graphic is great.
2019-04-11


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Flows and rhymes really well.
A pleasure to read
2019-04-10