this poem was written on Good Friday...and it was raining...


Watch the Rain (The tears shed for us )

Watch the rain
bleeding away our sins
renewed hope and faith
our souls saved because of him.

Watch the rain
droplets of his love
suffering from our pain
no one knew why he cried out loud.

Watch the rain
the tears shed for us
yet he was unashamed
he loved us too much.


Eloi,Eloi,lama sabachthani ?



Mark 15:34



Poetry by Kel
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Written on 2006-06-01 at 21:03

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Love Knight
I love this and the imagery and connection of the two. LOVE IT
2006-06-21


Amanda Manmohan
Hey Kelby, you know this was always one of my favourite poems of yours. The entire thing is perfect in every way. I love it :)
2006-06-01