Well, if it's not my best poem, at least it's short. You'll only lose about 40 seconds of life reading it!

Someday Soon

I should try

Church of Our Saviour

a mile down the road

rambunctiously progressive

or so I hear

even by Episcopalian standards


I should ask Christie

if she's ever read

"All Tropic Places Smell of Mold"

by Karl Shapiro


I should ask Jennifer

for a blessing for absolution

& if she'll hear my fifth step

Poetry by Thomas DeFreitas The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2019-09-12 at 14:40

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one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
True, 40 seconds, but I've read it three times now. Make that four.

arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
'rambunctious' is my kind of word!
'The smell of mold,' that one is hard to handle hahaha

ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Works for me, Thomas, just right.
Ken D