Uranus, The Magician (as per Holst's The Planets)


Uranus, The Magician

Take a glance

An icy blue gem
spinning slowly on its side
skittering across the solar system.

Zoom in

A lunar dance,
fairies, heros, and lovers
all twirling around the shimmering sphere.

Look closer

The robed magician
in powder blue attire
enchanting this place, where reality drifts.



Poetry by Ducks
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Written on 2021-05-06 at 21:59

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Steven Riddle
Lovely and beautifully allusive. Very nicely capturing both the reality of Uranus and his entourage and Holst’s music. Thank you.
2021-06-21


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2021-06-07


Lady Courtaire
Such an enchanting image you've woven, deeply evocative in the simplicity of its language. Encore!
2021-05-07


Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful.

Love the imaginative verses, each creative than the other. Just like a magician's work.
2021-05-07


Hans Bump
Wonderful pacing and presentation. When writing this, at no time did my hands leave my wrists. See the magic has inspired me.
2021-05-07


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
You draw us closer and deeper into the poem, and into the "icy blue gem."

A wonderful poem.
2021-05-07