The lullaby has ended

The lullaby has ended.
This song is not for you.
This song is not for anyone
who say it isn't true.

The music has gone deaf.
The tone has faded out.
The words are not for anyone
who have not got the doubt.

We used to make love like music.
We used to find peace in our song.
But a "we" is not for anyone
who cannot see love as long.

So I have to leave you now.
I wander into my musical mind.
The one of us will now be two.
We leave our love behind.

The lullaby has ended.
This song is not for you.
This song is not for anyone
who say it isn't true.




Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2005-08-19 at 00:52

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
ok i will look at the poem then.

starting line two and three with the same words isn't too great i feel. you could easily say the same thing without the repeat.

This song is not for you.
It is not for anyone
who says it isn't true.

a little bit of a barrier in the translation but that's ok. it's a good poem, just needs a little refining i think.
2005-08-30


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
i am sick of people like you who just post their poetry and want comments given on your thoughts but you just couldn't be arsed to take the time to go and visit others in this site and leave your thoughts on what they have written, why don't you just fuck off?
2005-08-19


Commentally Ill
well, fine then, it's not for me. (heartbroken sob)

but the music was soooo pretty. (pouts)


2005-08-19