Hey moon

hey there, Moon

all so silvery serene

resting on a snowy bed

of mountain peaks

yawning away to glory

with arms outstreched

into the sky.

 

You look so tantalising

litting up a morning like that

And then gone

after staying up all night

as if wanting to have one last look at me

and

waiting for me to 

say good bye.





Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-02-05 at 08:01

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Kathy Lockhart
I sure enjoyed reading your poem. I love the imagery and appreciate the feelings it invokes.

Language: 4
Format: 4
Mood: 4
Overall: 4
2023-02-24


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations! Your poem has been chosen to be featured on our home page by a fellow member of PoetBay. Thank you for posting on our poetry website!
2023-02-13


The sparrow
You paint a beautiful picture
of the moon…
2023-02-08


Mikael.K
Wonderful poem. I can se it floating ahead in the sky when I'm reading.
2023-02-07


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely lyrical and engaging. Well done!
2023-02-06


D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Same here. It had a nice lilt to it and the way you make the moon a character.
2023-02-06


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
i love it, a friendly conversation with the moon, sweet ~~~
2023-02-06