Web

Bright Autumn morning...
My fingers touched
A shining web,
Spoiling its silken spirality.

Remarkably beautiful,
Strangely strong and
Slightly sticky
So that I shuddered.

Not in distaste
For the superb structure
But for fear
Of the s... architect.



Poetry by Marie Cadavieco The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-10-08 at 07:38

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Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
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2023-10-23



I cherish the exactitude of presentation, the careful cadence, and the humour embedded in "architect"!
2023-10-09


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Charming poem, Marie. Your phraseology is brilliant.
Arachnophobia, why? Perhaps there was a time when tarantulas and other deadly versions were very prevalent and presented a real threat to humans so it is in our DNA? But then not everyone has this 'phobia' ?????
Blessings, Allen
2023-10-09


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice. Nothing is more beautiful than a spider web with dew on it. I don't understand why spiders are so scary...but they are.
2023-10-08


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the gentle . . . architecture . . . of this sweet, shuddering poem!
2023-10-08