Hmm...I wrote this while listening to "Electrical Storm" by U2. It's short but says a lot.


Vertigo

A desire so strong consumes me to no end
I breathe in and exhale.
Time stands still.
Nothing moves,
No one speaks.
It's just you and me.
Only time will tell when the music stops.
I draw you to me and every defense I own drops.
The music plays,
And with every note
I sink deeper
Into a whirlwind-
Soaring,
Spinning,
Free.




Poetry by transience
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Written on 2006-07-02 at 03:35

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Love Knight
short but the poem is great in details and imagery i like this poem. thank you for sharing.
2006-07-02