Walking


Where were we going
Waking in the dark
Walking under a question mark sky
Incorporeal and immaterially moving
Ghost branches background moonlight
Weaving shadow sea waves in circles increasingly widening and retreating like memories of time unthinkable and unopened
Like a question mark in the dark
Making our ways across the way
Without a light waking
In the dark.



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Written on 2025-07-02 at 00:38

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A verse that evokes a sense of mystery and fluid movement, weaving imagery of shadowy uncertainty and quiet introspection. The "question mark sky" and "ghost branches" conjure an otherworldly atmosphere, where the natural elements blur and intertwine with the intangible: memories, time, and unspoken thoughts. Its cyclical imagery of retreating waves parallels the themes of unanswered questions and eternal searching, portraying a journey that feels ethereal yet profoundly human. A beautifully enigmatic exploration of walking through the unseen.
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