MY COMEBACK POEM!!!! I KNOW IT'S A GOOD TOPIC.


Reminiscing(comeback poem)

I never knew what it meant losing someone like you from my life.
I never reminisced about that day I would lose you.
Now I'm here close to losing you like I'm close to hell.
I near the edge of my heart. Is my love going to jump off of the edge to lose all of what we have to "had"?
Yesterday, I had the biggest smile in the world. Today, the thought of us parting brings hell too close in into my mind.
I felt that smile turn upside down at a split of a second. With the feeling in my stomach that something even worse is about to happen.
My throat full of regret. My chest inside is skipping random beats. I feel the heat of what has happened.
A feeling in my stomach is growing more and more every minute that goes by. That feeling irritates me to my head and mind. That brings awful thoughts in this life of happen in moments to be nothing.
My life is empty without you being in it. I need you, God has sent you as my angel, so don't forget your duties that you have served in my heart, and the dreams you still have to fulfill in my heart.
The fantasies of having you in heaven, will they still exist?
I ask that one question, will God keep us together, or is it our job to keep loving each other?
I need to hear your voice, so my sun rises. I need to feel and touch your hands to let me feel that one special moment of flying with an angel in the sky.
I need to look into your eyes to see the peak of heaven. I need you for every second I live.
Forever by my side, I need you. People don't understand how much these two young lovers love each other.
God didn't put a minimum or limit age on love. I'll follow God until He brings me home.
When at home, I want to be with you, to be with God in our presence forever until He ceases all time.
I want you to follow with me, to be on the same path, to be the real lovers that reach heaven first.
I'm reminiscing if I'll still have you same time tomorrow in my possession, if I'll still have you safe hidden deep in my heart from all the bad.
I need you, to protect you, to serve you, to dedicate all my life to you, and to devote all my soul to you. How much do I love you?
It's more than what God can handle. So God, I ask you to
keep us in love, to be in your hands, to be wherever you are. We need you, most of us, well, I need you now the most.
Stop me from reminiscing about what can put us in the dark. Keep all of the thought, about my dreams, my fantasies, my love, my baby, my angel, and everything that belongs to us, keep them in my head.
I wait for your answer, well as waiting, for now
I'm Reminiscing!
D. Ocampo
© copyright of my mind




Poetry by Love Knight
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Written on 2006-07-26 at 09:03

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Tabitha Campbell
Yay your back welcome! great write!
2006-07-27


Arti
Welcome back.. Maybe these remnisciences enter your mind to inspire the others whose faith isnt as strong as yours...because in you, it will turn into poetry and flow. Maybe it is a test of your faith, you passed...yay!!
2006-07-27