What ever you do comes back three fold!This poem speaks for the women that suffer in silence!


Beware of




You took the life
out of me;

Like a Dove Goddess
I scream,

your eyes turn red
and explode!

You will never see
me again!

You tried to take my innocence!
You have hurt me!

My rage is pure!
Feel my wrath!

I believed in you!
I love you!!
I gave you my everything!!!

Feel how your blood
tastes in your mouth.

You will not take me!
Feel the darkness

approaching,
ready to take you

to the underworld.
Take your last breath,

while you see
your life passing

before your eyes. ...
Feel the pain

you have cause!
The Furies are here,

to remind you
what you have done!

I take away your voice;
You will not scream!

You will suffer
in silence. ...

As I did
Feel! Feel! Feel!

That's enough!
Do you understand now?

I love you, get up
and move on with your life.

You will not haunt me anymore,
You are forgiven. ...



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Written on 2006-08-09 at 13:28

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Amanda K
admire the strength of your piece. well-written and expressed.Bravo,dear.
2006-12-17


Zachary P. B.
you will not haunt me anymore
you are forgiven...

true forgiveness even to someone you are angry at is a beautiful thing.

the topic of this poem was one to be wary of. very intense.

wonderful write.

z
2006-08-10


Malin Johansson
A beautiful poem here Dear!!! strong and wise..!! as you are !!!:))
Hugs to you from Gothenburg
2006-08-09


Will
It's kinda funny I sat back savoring the idea of reading this piece because by the title I knew it would be powerful.
Man you didn't disappoint!!!

This was powerfully gripping, a bookmarked, must read indeed..

EXCELLENT WRITE.
2006-08-09


Dan Cederholm
**********************************

Yes my beloved I can see your sufering

and stribing thrue life to get whole and

you are a strong woman with rigth

intendent for life so you hunt evil with

love and understanding and your

forgivenes is so pure that the evil turned

to ashes . . . I love to read this peace of

a life story that are telling but I little child

that gets hurted and groove up to be a

strong and wise woman with so many

colors and so much grace that it take the

breath out of me!!!

YOU are so beautifuel in shape and words

and all that who is YOU!!!

Regards and a big hug and so many kisses

from me to YOU/Dan

**********************************
2006-08-09


Kathy Lockhart
chilling and powerful, NSW! You did it! You seized control and stand strong!!!! I am proud of you!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxx kathy
2006-08-09


rider
Ah...Poetess...You really are an avenging angel...A lot is played out within your imagination, yet you have too much empathy to see blood...You wait till a time produced punishment...A great heartfelt write...Ron.
2006-08-09