Writing a poem (pen fighting)!



I write this poem
in stanzas and lines
trying to fill the paper . . .
With thoughts who is mine
and I cant denied that
I really love writing
instead of fussy and fighting!

After a while the words
start to running faster
the activity or movement
of a runner who runs for the goal
But then I slow down
and use my imagination
. . . there was a time
when I didn't write at all!

In time and space I realized
that the thoughts who is mine
I put them all in print on papers
and share them with all those poets
I read all your texts with care
and so much joy and imagination
And if the night newer ends I know
I did what I could there with my pen

So to all my friends on poetbay
I say you are all so great and good
you share your deep inner thoughts
in this superb neighbourhood
we called the poetbay.com
And when I die and reach for Heaven
I know there is a special place for us
a heavenly corner on a cloud
who is named Holy poetbay corner




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-08-13 at 11:33

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Evelyn
this was nice!! really sweet..and so true;)hehehe...
2006-08-13


barbie
AWwww Dan, this was sweet..we have all battled the pen at times, and poured out our hearts to it. Sometimes it yields to us and sometimes, we do struggle..creative! B.
2006-08-13