I wrote this right after writing "Forever Peace"...The first lines are similar, but then it changed into a whole other story...I tried to imagine something I dont really know much about...Seing the world through the eyes of a little lost giirl...It was


Chasing My Soul...

Death is what Im looking for
Something I adore

I don`t want to be no more
They called me a whore

A slut they did not want to see
They said as they were raping me

Shut up, Bitch
You`re not worth nothing
I`m going to fucking kill you

Those words haunt me at night

FUCKING KILL YOU

Something got killed that night
I didn`t even make a fight

Lost my soul
It`s what you fucking killed

Why did you leave the hardest part to me
Bleeding
Chasing my soul...


-mr.m 17/08/2006




Poetry by Mr.Mist
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Written on 2006-08-17 at 01:31

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Karen Canning
you write with a very graphic emotional pen, this tugs at the reader and holds them captive, the ending sums up the total powerfulness of the whole entire piece, I relate to the first two lines

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-14


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
this one, i feel,
is way better then 'forever peace',
but i do perfer your happier
poetry.

liz
2006-08-18