I am so sorry my beloved




If I hurt you with my behaviour
I am really so sorry
it was not my meaning
So I say

I am walking in the dessert
of what I have said and done
I fell like I am dead . . .
- Dead man walking

My emotions has captured me
and the time is out
My body is mortal
But not my soul

So I lay my thrust
in my soul
and take a steep back
its up to you now my dear

And if you don't
then I newer come back
its me who do wrong
I am realy so sorry my beloved

There is always two minds
in an argue, and two explains
the mirror that reflect
our thoughts and pain

And the mirror of free spirit
when we are happy and when we are sad
We reflect what we feel for the moment
and only we can se it in the mirror, of what is true


You se what is you and try to mirror it to me
I se what is me and try to mirror it to you
But what is true? Mirroring is just mirror
of how we feel of body heart and soul

- And the brain who is often take the control

Sometimes we are living in a fantasy world
with dreams and pictures who we thought
is real! Sometime it is and sometime not!
When we look at our real life, it makes no sense!

Wherever we have been and wherever we go
the life is right here live today. . .
So forgive me my love if I hurt you
it was not my meaning

I feel like a fool that has step on your foot
so forgive me my love you put me out of control
I am in pain of my deeds and you know it
and I feel so ashamed and so sorry

Sincerely with all of my love I send it to you
I am crying inside but still I think about you
So I send kisses and hugs my beloved. . .
Right now to YOU, Please forgive me?

Your Dan for true, and hugs to you!





Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-08-20 at 13:59

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keith nunes
very deep dan. you have strong feelings and you express them sincerely
2006-08-22


Kathy Lockhart
Sorry and repentance and change. That's what is needed to revive the love! kathy
2006-08-20


Teala
Admitting you are wrong always is the first step---this is a wonderful poem, full of depth and raw emotions!
2006-08-20


wee2souls
A beautiful expression you did
show within yours soul..
how you let yourself look within
a warm hearted felt in ths read
how you will be forgiven...:))
these emotions you surley show,,
..beautuful read!!
hugeramas of many!!!
cindy
2006-08-20


Zainab
This is so beautiful
And I'm sure whoever she is She will forgive you becoz I could feel how you are feeling guilty and you want to correct yourself as you mean it in your heart
Kisses and hugs
Rate:5
2006-08-20