i wrote this poem in the initial stages of my poetic life, when the girl i love went out station for some work ,i hope u'll love it. ur precious advice awaited.


peep into my heart(revised n reposted for thomas, one of my first poems)

peep into my heart dear,
it cries for few.
and when i say few,
i dont mean you.

for you dear my heart doesn't cry,
in your presence to find happiness i try.

but when you are away,
everything colourfull turns to grey.

i m missin u dear,
and i mean it.
the stain of pain on this note,
no one can clean it.

where did you go,
please tell me why did you leave me so
helpless, i am helpless.
change yourself and try to be a little selfless.

already we spend very little time together,
and now this loneliness,
brings me to the end of my tether.
why dont you understand,
of my life you are the only feather.

i know u tried your level best,
and on luck you left the rest.
but me how much are u gonna test !!!!

dear i am not that strong,
please don't make me wait for such long,
yae ! i know i may be wrong,
but i don't want the lyrics,
i wanna hear the song.

no matter how many twists and turns it takes,
to my excitement perfectly,
no difference it makes.

i wanna be there,
i just wanna be there,
now this lonliness is turning,
to be my worst nightmare.
there's no one with whom,
these feelings i can share.


i'll be indebted to you,
if for me some moments you spare.

you are my music,
you are my beauty.
you are my responsibility,
you are my duty.

in this dark night you are my moon,
six days hav already passed " please come soon "



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Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-08-28 at 20:14

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Coolaaron88
Good Job, Your feelings of missing shine through.
2006-08-28