plz b there for me.......... this poem was written , when the sorrows were limmiting me frm keeping a hope to suvive the pain that i was going through.


i need u

am going crazy,
don know why.

i am so depressed,
it feels to die.

i have lost the hope,
i see no way to revive

only one reason for,
i need to strive.

i feel no one with me,
i am so lone.

why to dipression,
i am so prone.

i want to cry,
no tears come out.

every fine decession to me,
seems a doubt.

why every small reason,
hurts my heart.
why every small reason,
drills like dart.

how do i make,
myself heal.
when i hav lost,
my zest , my zeal.

i cant take it anymore,
its too much to bare.
please make me again ,
your old dandare.

help me someway,
through your love.
needs you badly,
me , my now.




Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-08-28 at 22:13

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Zainab
I like this poem
I aslo agree with Michael
You could put I'm so alone rather than lone
But anyway keep that good work
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2006-09-06


Michael G
nice.. i only have 2 questions.. the second line "i don know why" i think that would be a don't... and "i am so lone" maybe would be better "im so alone" it still keeps the meter.. but makes more sense maybe.. keep up the good stuff!
2006-08-30