Some sad piece about loving feelings when he doesn't come for a virtual date


Sorrow

Sometimes I think
That if I'd reach
Only for you
To come to me
I'd probably die
From sorrow
That you don't come
That all I see
Is just an empty space
Where you should be
So I have to
Keep whole the world
During this time
When you have been gone
When I'm waiting for you
Alone




Poetry by anna3
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Written on 2005-09-27 at 17:02

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Nathalia
Very nice, this one. And sad.
2005-10-03


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
an air of sorrow, yes... waiting for this person's presence... feeling lonely without it... this touches me as it isnt a good feeling to feel this way at all *hug*... sometimes makes the void bigger... i think you expressed that experience really well... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-09-28


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
nicely done here anna, less grammatical errors in this piece, well none that i see :) a virtual date? sadness hits us every day, but we are so used to it i suppose we shrug it off and smile anyway.
2005-09-27