Are you up to the challenge? ;)

The challenge will end sometime around Friday next week (the 27th of October, 2006) so keep your entries coming! :)



Rhymes (((challenge)))

Okay, my first challenge folks! *excited*

Here are the "rules".

Pick four words. The first words that come to your mind. ^^

Then rhyme the words two times.

This will leave you with two words for each word rhymed.

E.g.

RHYME 1 Sue:

Glue

Shoe

RHYME 2 Pick:

Stick

Tick

RHYME 3 Dog:

Log

Frog

RHYME 4 Jack:

Attack

Lack


Now, to the actual poem-
It may be constructed as you wish BUT you MUST include these words IN ORDER and ONLY ONCE!!

E.g.

Have you heard of poor old SUE?
She ripped her shirt and mended it with GLUE
Then she ironed it with her SHOE

She found an insect on her pet, what should she do? She had to PICK
So she decided she'd take a STICK
and remove that nasty, big, fat, blood-filled TICK

From Fido, her loyal little cocker-spaniel DOG
Who loved to go and chase some LOG
Sometimes he'd even chew on an innocent FROG

Sue had a husband, his name was JACK
Jack had suffered severely from a heart ATTACK
She would've payed for his heart medicine, if money wasn't one thing that she'd LACK...


GOOD LUCK everyone, and above all... don't forget to have yourself a nice laugh, some rhymes can turn out pretty comical. :)

Many hugs from Sabrina ;)





Poetry by Sabrina
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Written on 2006-10-17 at 16:34

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Lourdes
ok ! Im in your challenge , but I bent the three-line-rule slightly .. but only slightly .
2006-10-20


Saga
I can do this!!!
2006-10-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
i gotta give this a go
rgds mike
2006-10-20