Love in the air just a beginning


Come tonight


Yes you're right, my love

We don't need to hurry up at all

We have a lot of time

To meet each other

Step by step

We will know more and more

That you would fill my soul

To complete me whole



I don't want to disappoint you

Not at all

I just love to hear your voice

I just need to be sure of it

That you feel the same

What I feel

That's why I write

All these things

But I believe

That you want me still

And I have hope

For this love

Which wont disappoint

Anyone



I'm so hungry of your words

I'm curious of your soul

Your point of view

For the things

Your relationships

Your life which you live

As much as your touch and kiss

As much as your palms and lips on me

I want you whole in me

Please complete me

Be within

This is my dream



But you know

That I wish still

To have your heart

So I will try

To be this right girl

If you wish

Even living here

Within your dreams

About me

I wish to make you happy

And I know you want this same

And I love this

I want this

I need

So, please come to me

When I'll go to sleep

Come to my dream

I need to feel your touch inside

I wish to hold your mind

And kiss you for good night

Tonight




Poetry by anna3
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Written on 2005-09-30 at 15:26

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
ah love, this overflows with it :) ... a longing to be with the person, hold and touch them and be made complete with their love and caring... its easy to see this person means an awful lot to you... this is tender and speaks to my quiet longing too... beautiful dream which makes one sigh... there are no barriers in dreams and nothing is denied there... a good place to be when all else cant oblige... i very much enjoyed this :) thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-10-07


Latiep Nolingus
long and brimming with emotion. what a tricky feeling love can be. nice work.
2005-10-01


Commentally Ill
aw.
2005-10-01


Erased
I like the accent. It gives a sense of the separateness , uncertainty and impatience for to have everything at once, but knowing this is not wise. Also, I think the line
'why I write these things'
suggests notes in a diary, which makes the language grammar work.
2005-09-30


John Ashleigh
All those words you missed out, I reckon sounds very effective, purposely or accidently. -- Chasingtheday pointed them out and corrected you, but I think it gives a sense of the woman/man being out of breath or so deeply in love that he/she is losing the words as he/she talks. Very good.
2005-09-30


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
you right - you're right
want disappoint - want to disappoint
this same - the same
wont - won't
hungry your words - hungry for...
curious your soul - curious of...

love never leaves the heart i believe, sometimes it gets twisted and changed but it never really leaves. :)
2005-09-30