A quick little ditty I thought up 10 Minutes ago.


One little Drink of Whisky

One little drink of Whisky
Makes not a great deal of sense
But two of the same will open the game
And three gets me over first fence
Now Four feels it's never been there
Five feels much the same
When Six comes along I'll break out in song
By Seven I'm counting the pence
If I can count to Eight at this time
With my money all over the floor
The best thing to do
For me and for you
Is to kick me straight out of the door
Goood night



Poetry by Ropawil
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Written on 2006-10-26 at 16:34

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Funny stuff. Sounds as though you may have written from experience, if not your own, possibly observational.
2006-10-26



Yes you are so right, there is nothing worse to deal with than a drunk when you are not!lol Funny and yet dark poem on the wonders of just one more. It needs work so don't get too excited, but as it is a quickie, it contains a worth expressing thought imo. I enjoyed the read. Tai
2006-10-26