Yes I know it's not a challenge but Im making it an unofficial challenge


Who killed the Flower ~Who Killed Challenge~

Petal subside, leaves severed from life
Unsuspecting growth stopped by a knife
Color in bloom fall silently; all hope is lost
Potential in summer destroyed by sudden frost

Petals cry out for health; power up for life
One final knife would end their strife
All hope is lost and even the seed
Below the ground, can only bleed




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-10-29 at 17:56

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Zoya Zaidi
A nicely done poem.
Let us seewhat I can do with this challenge?
Love, Zoya
2006-10-29


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi Aaron give me a few days i will participate
well done
2006-10-29