NSW, I would guess this was a dream? lol I had a very similar one when I was about 18. You are shedding your oppressive skin so well. I really enjoyed this. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-01-12

The Nxt LeveL
Very cleverly crafted. I am in agreement with most. Our greatest freedom comes from self acceptance.
2006-12-19

NotaDeadPoet
Nicely done, clearly moving in the right directio (naked truth) and back again -- personification and exquisite topic, barely touched.
A favorite topic of mine, but will discuss that in latewr writes.
2006-12-17

munir mezyed
to be a writer needs to be free and you have a free soul..
Cute and nice poem
Munir
2006-12-13

Hazel
clothes being a lie, someone commented earlier....that is possibly true....as we are not telling the truth about ourselves our bodies if the are concealed - as there are so many things your body can tell others about your life and yourself......although i couldnt say no one could notice a naked person running through the street unless it became the norm....excellent poem!
2006-12-12

Amanda K
on the surface, the poem says something maybe not that vital or important but as we dig deeper many hidden meanings and pictures that make the mind wonder. about true -self or indifference. you wrote it smartly and i liked it.

Warm Regards,
2006-12-05

Mukul Dahal
This is wonderfully said and crafted into a poem.
2006-11-19

Angel_in_disguise
exhibisionist is epeidixias? ???
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
2006-11-14

Angel_in_disguise
it's great! i loved it !
2006-11-03

brian paglia
Awesome job.I think it relates to anyone who feels that their life is just a little too predictable and that somewhere along the way they lost a part of themselves.I'm probably way-off but it worked for me:))
2006-11-02

kid
As thomas as said a the most occurin tool u use in this wonderful poem is symbolism. And the way u use it is superb.
I respect it.
2006-11-02

lastromantichero
I bet someone noticed and was too shy to say hi this is a lovley poem night soul woman well done rgds mike
2006-11-02

Saga
Everybody got a birthday suit, but never wants to wear it in public, great piece!!!!!
2006-11-02

wee2souls
To be comfortable in your own skin!!Run!!
like ya never ran before!!!! free !!! bird!!
:))));loved this write!!!!!!!!
hugs to you cybersister friend:))))))
cindy
2006-11-01

keith nunes
don't let the world get in your way. you're an individual - be yourself! go girl
2006-11-01

Kathy Lockhart
Be yourself in all your spendour! your spirit should be without any restrictions. Run naked and free!
2006-11-01