I'm Sorry, I'm Lost!


I'm sorry, I'm lost.
I'm falling, I'm crossed.
I'm limping, I'm through
with the sessions of you.

I thought we were good,
but I guess I misunderstood.
We detained and derailed
but we never exhaled.

We destroyed our slow.
Your ego has no shadow.
I found your bitter face,
follow in your trace.

The paths of yours slowed me down.
I can't breathe in this tainted town.
The fee is huge, can't pay the cost.
I'm sorry, I am lost.



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-12-02 at 00:15

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Wonderful, absoluteluy wonderful, this poem had rhythm and it flowed, i like the concept, i loved the rhytm, good job (2nd to last line spell high not hugh)

~Kiva
2006-12-02