Some love words in a form of a poem


Beautiful morning

Let's go and join them
We shall laugh and sing
With the birds

It's a beautiful morning
Gentle sunlight
The birds are singing outside

Leave the bed now
That's my command
Princess lamia says

It's 7 in the morning
Honey wake up
I'll leave you otherwise

I'm opening the curtains
So that you wake up
As earliest as possible

Can you hear, Can you hear
How beautiful they sing
With their unique voice

I don't care
How we look like
You will go with your pajama
And I'll go with my night dress

Can't you see
Beautiful weather
Beautiful morning
We just can't miss that





Words by Zainab
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Written on 2006-12-12 at 13:14

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Kathy Lockhart
Happy, Happy Morning!! Sounds like a beautiful way to start the day. I saw, I heard, and felt it all.
2006-12-14


Teala
This is such a beautiful poem! It is always nice to seize the day--enjoy yourselves, soak up nature's beauty-BRAVO!
2006-12-14


Amanda K
we sometimes overlook the simple beautiful things in life and care for the trivial ones. Nature with its beauty and charm, can make you feel so great. unfrotunately, ppl don stop by to watch, appreciate and be thankful to God for having it. I loved your piece so refreshing and delightful 2 read.

love ya,

Amanda

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Dan Cederholm
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Oh what a lovely poem and this

Unique rhytm, I love it Zainab!!!!

You are so good to write about

feelings . . . and I just wonder

what sort of birds was singing

for you ?

All the best to you and your family!

/ Dan

Psssssttt *BOOKMARK*

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2006-12-12


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent!!!Simply excellent!!!Well written my friend!I like it a lot!Bookmarked!!!*applause*

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salem
oh good done
thanx

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2006-12-12


wonderbread
this is surely the explination of a beautiful moment...i thought you did it very calmly, quite real, though...you can imagine the smile on your face, and the dismay on his...but, surely, he eventually gives in to the moment...well done.

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